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Heart Left At Port
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Wednesday, 19th March 2014 @ 12:44:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I sought to see across great seas that misery loves company.
A darkened heart thou seldom sees the light.
In this spell of atrophy, this muscle beat is seldom seen.
Scorn from a depth that blinds a lovers fate.
In the mirror the face remains, darkness hidden from a mortals remains.
Memory a curse if never taught to forgive.
In the eyes pain deeply cries, scars that tear compound with lies.
True loves kiss assumes to break the curse.
Out at sea I pictured thee, a beauty fair to misery.
It kept me great with company.
I dare not see the damage done.
When i left you to chase the sun.
Forever i believed that you were there.
Now I am back by your side I see the pain you try to hide.
A Darkened tear rolls down those sullen cheeks.
To you my love.
Oh please forget.
The quest of youth should be forgive.
This hurt you hold thats ice so cold.
Let it not take you until you get old.
Give to me that gentle kiss, retrieve that heart that i foolishly left.
And let me claim it at the port.
For in time our hearts do entwine.
A strength that beats the gears of time.
For the love I have for you, is not a curse that can follow through.
Our fate is what we make.
The jewels is a lovers embrace.
Let me be the guide for better days.
You are my guiding light.
I was blind to leave you that night.
The sun only shadows the beauty that you hold.
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lostrelic
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2014-03-19 00:44:02]
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Re: Heart Left At Port
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by Invierno on
Wednesday, 19th March 2014 @ 03:27:45 PM AEST
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I like this. Classical in content. May I suggest the removal of a period at every sentence? It chops it up and breaks the flow.
Wonderful stuff and a heart-rending topic. |
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Re: Heart Left At Port
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by Sagefairy on
Friday, 21st March 2014 @ 01:51:00 AM AEST
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| Is a beautiful tale of what often happens to love less valued than adventure. The rare redemption is a hopeful ending. Lovely work. Blessings, SF |
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Re: Heart Left At Port
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 14th November 2014 @ 01:01:50 PM AEST
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truly a beauty, a joy to read,
hugs n' love nessa |
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