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The eighth dream
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Friday, 14th March 2014 @ 01:04:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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The eighth dream
I cannot think of a single moment in my life
That I have not dreamed of her
She has always been in my heart
Looming at the pause of every swell
Of an ancient and denuded star
Seizing the sky with its song
The eighth dream is a sea
No longer deep enough
To surge against the shore
It is the face of craggy cliffs
Windswept and worn
The eighth dream is a reckless fury
A plastic brooch stronger than steel
The memory of grey eyes and teal
It is an old hunger satiated
Left unresolved
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iodinelove
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2014-03-14 13:04:43]
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Re: The eighth dream
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by Jyssvw on
Friday, 14th March 2014 @ 04:39:06 PM AEST
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| very interesting to read. great writing. keep it up. |
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Re: The eighth dream
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by houseofleaves on
Monday, 17th March 2014 @ 05:27:27 AM AEST
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| I like this, sometimes we can be haunted by love |
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Re: The eighth dream
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 17th March 2014 @ 06:06:18 PM AEST
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Some beautiful content here. Nicely done.
~Scorp |
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Re: The eighth dream
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by Voices-Ghost on
Monday, 17th March 2014 @ 08:39:22 PM AEST
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Powerful, emotional write. Every breath you take consumes you more, yet you continue to breathe.
Excellent piece!
Voice's Ghost
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Re: The eighth dream
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 21st May 2014 @ 12:56:21 AM AEST
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exquisite and beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa |
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