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What Can I Do?

Contributed by ruby_star_angel on Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



There's too many obstacles, too many choices
Inside my head, I hear so many voices
I swear I try to keep my life on track
But its so hard, I can't always react

I'm doing the best to keep myself sane,
But without your help, its just not the same
Suicide crept inside my mind; it stays
I could hear its cold voice whisper its many ways

All these question swirl in my mind
My past stalks me; I can't leave it behind
All of those thoughts and memories takes me breath away
Someday, it will all disappear. Someday..

Should I wait for some kind of sign?
Or take my life away; make death mine
For now, I'll just sit and wait
For maybe, I may collide with fate

Every day, I watch everyone around me
I can't take it; they're all so happy
Why am I the one who can't contend?
Why is my wish for my life to end?

At night I lie in my bed, wide awake
I go insane every now and then, its my sake
I'm so used to it, I don't mind it anymore
Insanity is closer to me now then it was before




Copyright © ruby_star_angel ... [ 2003-05-19 04:35:00]
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Re: What Can I Do? (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 12:10:37 PM AEST
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Wow, i found this very close to home. I just LOVED your style of writing. The second stanza stood out to me the most..
keep writing it out, and you can pm me if you ever feel like it...
x_x_x


Re: What Can I Do? (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 05:27:39 AM AEST
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I feel the pain, understand the hurt, and I loved this poem.
Keep up the writting you are very good at it and I look forward to more of your work.




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