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The Rain
Contributed by
JacobJowers
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Saturday, 8th March 2014 @ 09:08:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Even though it pours
The clouds part ways
Making the path
For me.
Just like the clouds part
Another cloud is there to join them
Clouds have no skeletons
For they may never stand.
Clouds may never stand
Because clouds
Are always looking straight ahead
And right back.
Looking you in the eyes
But they may never stare directly
For their eyes
Are like the sun.
The sun is your future
If you look too far ahead
You don't go forward
You don't go backwards.
You go blind
For we as humans
Can not see the road ahead
Without destroying our minds.
Copyright ©
JacobJowers
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2014-03-08 21:08:06]
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Re: The Rain
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by shelby on
Sunday, 9th March 2014 @ 03:43:52 AM AEST
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Love the wisdom within this verse,nicely done.
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Re: The Rain
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by Invierno on
Sunday, 9th March 2014 @ 10:03:22 AM AEST
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| Ultimately saying, 'live in the now'. I like this very much. The end is strong. |
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Re: The Rain
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by speedy on
Sunday, 9th March 2014 @ 03:42:06 PM AEST
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Very interesting. Good write.
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