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The Night Sky
Contributed by
JacobJowers
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Friday, 7th March 2014 @ 08:28:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I look at the stars at night
Friends texting me, saying "Pick up, dude"
But I'll fight
Because you're the only star in the sky I see tonight.
The moon looks at me in hidden malice
A smile bright on its face
The toothless grin the only thing lighting the sky
But you push it away and make a smile.
The moon goes round and round
To some new person
Every day
But you never go.
One day I ask
"Why?"
You smile at me
And say.
You've done it right
Time to let me alone fight
Your sight brightens
When you're around me.
Because your light never gets old
Your monochrome chord never missing a beat
Never too late to lean in close to me
Saying, "The moon isn't the only light tonight".
Copyright ©
JacobJowers
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2014-03-07 20:28:52]
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Re: The Night Sky
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by softerware on
Friday, 7th March 2014 @ 10:43:33 PM AEST
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I love your description of the moon! I could see it floating up there grinning at you!
My favorite line is "Never too late to lean in close to me" …
Thank you for a lovely reminder of a romantic evening…we can all share with you!
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Re: The Night Sky
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by Invierno on
Saturday, 8th March 2014 @ 09:05:34 AM AEST
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| Well done....chills at the end and I don't get them often any more. Chills borne in the beauty of love's blossom and expression. |
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