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Nature's Band
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Tuesday, 4th March 2014 @ 05:36:12 PM in AEST
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I stand high on cliffs edge
Below me the drumming of the waves
They crash in foamy brilliance
Music which my heart saves
Wind blows gently on my face
It rustles through my hair
A moving tranquil place
Removing all despair
The sound of the surf calls to me
As high above its chorus I stand
I feel ever closer to God
As I listen to natures band
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NoSaint
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2014-03-04 17:36:12]
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Re: Nature's Band
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th March 2014 @ 09:09:09 PM AEST
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They're one of my favorite bands!
Loved this poem! I could feel it!
Thank you, thank you, thank you for the peaceful tranquility.
Tim |
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Re: Nature's Band
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by softerware on
Wednesday, 5th March 2014 @ 10:50:23 PM AEST
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I love the line "they crash in foamy brilliance!"..wow, you had me right there with the spray on my sunburned cheeks..
Thank you for such a great little trip to hear the music!
softerware |
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Re: Nature's Band
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by The_Unknown on
Thursday, 6th March 2014 @ 05:30:20 PM AEST
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Nature surely has the most beautiful instruments and sounds, if only we pause to listen...
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Re: Nature's Band
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by Invierno on
Friday, 7th March 2014 @ 07:19:38 AM AEST
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I like this poem quite a bit. I am no expert, by any means, and I only mean well here, NoSaint. Perhaps there is a touch of forced rhyme here? (Waves, saves). To me (again, just my personal thoughts), I like the sound of 'Music which saves my heart' instead of"..which my heart saves'. The heart is not so much a digital recorder, but an absorber of empirical beauty that, in the absorption, saves and protects our psyche from the brutality of real life.
At the end, it was highly reminiscent of Emily Dickinson
"As high above its chorus I stand
I feel ever closer to God
As I listen to natures band'
Well done and I applaud the effort and am grateful for your sharing. |
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Re: Nature's Band
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by shelby on
Saturday, 8th March 2014 @ 01:25:31 AM AEST
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I think you are back! YEYYYYYYYYY this is beautiful I can hear the waves from here.Love ya!
hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Nature's Band
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th April 2014 @ 01:54:12 PM AEST
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beautiful images, such a lovely write,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Nature's Band
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd May 2014 @ 09:41:27 PM AEST
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| Very vivid images .Very peaceful. |
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