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Shoot the Moon
Contributed by
Jigget
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Sunday, 2nd March 2014 @ 11:08:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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i tend to defend
the pretending of intending
to ascend to who i could've been
while pretending
i'm dancing with the wind
claiming it's a friend
knowing it's the end
right behind my favorite wrong
but it's just sooooo right.
so light. so bright.
don't fight the bite
don't see the proof
don't care don't stare
don't you even dare
don't you do the Truth.
Shoot the Moon.
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Jigget
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2014-03-02 11:08:51]
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Re: Shoot the Moon
(User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on
Monday, 3rd March 2014 @ 08:38:05 AM AEST
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At first read, I assigned silliness to this attempt.
At second read, I discerned an underlying intensity...
a seriousness of things I myself have broached (though, I concede I like your tackle more than mine...it has a whimsical flitting I most admire).
The endeavour to push on the walls of so weighty a topic are inspiring to me, and I thank you.
I should like to read more of your pleasure. (I never call poetry 'work'). How could an act of such joy be deemed 'work', even in a 'body of'?
Well done and many thanks.
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Re: Shoot the Moon
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by Invierno on
Tuesday, 4th March 2014 @ 04:58:48 PM AEST
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| Grabby. Catchy. Light but tinged with despair....I often go for that myself. not the easiest of tasks. Well done....like the other commenter, I would like to see more from you. thanks for sharing, my friend. |
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