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With open eyes
Contributed by
Jaywritten
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Wednesday, 26th February 2014 @ 07:50:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Seeping through the rigid lines
of a fragile heart,
an altered mind.
Liquid thoughts of change
set the standards
for an incredible way.
The possibilities lie ahead
morphing upon the newest visions.
The highs and lows soon consume us,
focusing on all except the obvious.
The extravagant bonds of a
human creation
The light and life
our only
salvation.
Copyright ©
Jaywritten
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2014-02-26 19:50:52]
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Re: With open eyes
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 27th February 2014 @ 05:10:58 PM AEST
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beautifully written, i was lost in your lines,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: With open eyes
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by softerware on
Thursday, 27th February 2014 @ 11:16:33 PM AEST
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We see what we want to see and even then we alter it to suit our reality! Well said.
Won't you please take a moment to comment on someone else's poetry? They will appreciate it as much as you do!
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