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Skytop Serenity
Contributed by
codeofcohen
on
Tuesday, 25th February 2014 @ 12:29:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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From atop my lofty haven
I read poems to the birds
I spill my anguish into the wind
Or, at least, what I can put into words
The feathers of the glossy black
Caressing, cradling, cleansing
My mind of my earthly failures
When loves lithe life crumbles
Ascend with the blackest of ravens
A neutral eternity of wind
Serene silence
Save for, savour, the beating of wings
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codeofcohen
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2014-02-25 12:29:56]
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Re: Skytop Serenity
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th February 2014 @ 05:27:00 PM AEST
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I really be likin' the imagery in this. Nicely done.
 to YPDC and thank you for an enjoyable read.
Tim |
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Re: Skytop Serenity
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 27th February 2014 @ 08:55:30 PM AEST
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this is beautiful, i just love it!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Skytop Serenity
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by softerware on
Thursday, 27th February 2014 @ 11:30:25 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this from start to finish. Atop your lofty haven…above the scars of the world, you have found renewal, and left your readers with hope that such a place exists for them as well.
softerware |
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Re: Skytop Serenity
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 4th March 2014 @ 12:39:33 AM AEST
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yes yes
FLOWING BEAUTIFULLY
Well done... |
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