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Ecstasy Ryder
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Monday, 24th February 2014 @ 10:54:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In the forest of equilibrium
there is a full moon tonight
Clouds of cotton candy
sweetly rain down love
from high up above in the sky
oh
in a field of moans
ecstasy drips and flows
slowly it overwhelms me and I explode,
voices whisper
as fall in deep....
It's so beautiful I never want to come out.
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2014-02-24 22:54:48]
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Re: Ecstasy Ryder
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by gypsymaddness on
Tuesday, 25th February 2014 @ 02:34:25 AM AEST
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Wow. This poem feels kinda mysterious in a way. It feels a little dark yet sensual. Romantic and beautiful.
Thanks for the poem. The wording was marvelous. |
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Re: Ecstasy Ryder
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by codeofcohen on
Tuesday, 25th February 2014 @ 02:51:11 AM AEST
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| Very good, fascinatingly imaginitive, one of my favourites here :) |
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Re: Ecstasy Ryder
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 27th February 2014 @ 08:34:49 PM AEST
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this is beautiful, love the feeling it conveys,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Ecstasy Ryder
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 26th March 2014 @ 11:21:56 AM AEST
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Oooh. I am delighted I decided to venture onto your page as it has been awhile. This sweet and sexy poem hit the spot on "hump" day.
~Scorp ;) |
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Re: Ecstasy Ryder
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th May 2015 @ 03:22:04 AM AEST
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Very nice, indeed. The forest of equilibrium sounds like it could also kinda be dizzying. :)
Thanks,
Tim |
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