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From Tracks to Tranquility
Contributed by
codeofcohen
on
Monday, 24th February 2014 @ 07:04:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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As I lie on the tracks,
I can feel it begin
Will I die on these tracks?
Faint hope swells within
As the sadness attacks
I remember my 'sin'
But the leaves from the trees land like
Lips on my skin
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codeofcohen
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2014-02-24 19:04:45]
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Re: From Tracks to Tranquility
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by gypsymaddness on
Tuesday, 25th February 2014 @ 02:14:57 AM AEST
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| Emotional while still reamining calm, this poem is very good. It brought a sigh from my soul. |
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Re: From Tracks to Tranquility
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 25th February 2014 @ 10:57:46 AM AEST
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there's a spark in the dark
and
you begin to live again,
well done.... |
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Re: From Tracks to Tranquility
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 28th February 2014 @ 10:22:23 PM AEST
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vivid images, beautifully written,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: From Tracks to Tranquility
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 6th July 2014 @ 05:42:47 PM AEST
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Oh wow!!!! You created such a vivid picture. Great write!!! Well done. Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful talents with us. We all truly appreciate it.
*S* Cynthia |
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