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Invisible
Contributed by
mick
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Saturday, 22nd February 2014 @ 10:06:08 PM in AEST
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I've spent my entire life trying to convince
my shadow I should be followed,
why I should be seen and why
I should not be alone. But I have yet to
find something to say, I always convince
myself that I am somehow important
yet always fail and that is why people
never ask who I am.
And this will continue because no one
will say goodbye but people will always
leave.
The scars on my wrists are the memories
of those who never where in my life but always
in the same place and always co-existing.
So here is to you the beautiful girl
waiting for the same stop, to the guy
that has managed to talk to her.
I got these scars by trying to
believe in myself that you have just
disproved.
Copyright ©
mick
... [
2014-02-22 22:06:08]
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Re: Invisible
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd February 2014 @ 10:14:51 PM AEST
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title invisible did catch my eye... is it mysterious how behind the scenes one feels, something that couldn't be represented. This is good, kept me to the end. disapproval from whom. odd how it occurs to be no one else but our self in the end , oh that shadow that follows us around everywhere, even in our sleep.
Thanks!
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Re: Invisible
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by emystar on
Sunday, 23rd February 2014 @ 12:27:23 AM AEST
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Woooo bummer ,friend. The writing is exceptional but it's the part between the lines that has me baffled.
You know I'm always around here some where. A friend to the end.
Bigg huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy
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Re: Invisible
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 23rd February 2014 @ 10:09:45 PM AEST
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| the first two lines enchanted me; love that... excellent write sans words spelled wrong, hugs n' love nessa |
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