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Vagabond
Contributed by
spike
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Saturday, 22nd February 2014 @ 04:01:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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in golden years
I sought the road, and all
the good things on it,
faced the dark uncertainties
and sacrificed upon it
but I’m older now, and
long behind, are all the
hungers so inclined;
those wild oats are sown
—I just want to find home
the places lived are all but gone,
pearls of jumbled memories
the pathway back too overgrown,
just shadows now, and vagaries
I know I craved adventure in
a world I chose to roam,
but I’m tired and I’m lonely, and
just want to find home.
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spike
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2014-02-22 04:01:15]
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Re: Vagabond
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by shelby on
Saturday, 22nd February 2014 @ 08:22:22 PM AEST
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Beautiful write my friend.So much emotion captured within its lines.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Vagabond
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th February 2014 @ 09:11:44 AM AEST
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| Wherever we go, for whatever reason, we still need a place to call home, where we feel wanted and want to be. The feeling of loneliness is strong in your poem, but I hope not too much regret. Well written, and connects to the reader from the first line. Very suitable photo. |
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Re: Vagabond
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 26th February 2014 @ 01:22:04 AM AEST
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truly beautiful, "the pathway back too overgrown" wow, that really moved me, excellent write my friend,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Vagabond
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 28th February 2014 @ 06:45:28 PM AEST
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There is a real depth of thought here, so powerfully displayed.
A wealth of emotion in a short space, that's the quality of your work.
It is very reassuring to know that whenever I choose to read what you write I'll know it has been worthwhile taking the time.
Great stuff
Steve |
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Re: Vagabond
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by spud on
Tuesday, 4th March 2014 @ 04:45:57 AM AEST
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As the old saying goes .... 'the only thing in life
that's free is fresh air' - the rest is trial and error,
wandering, wondering, pondering, learning,
invention, re-invention, accepting, changing,
regretting, laughing, crying, loving, and perhaps
at the end of it all.... satisfaction. It's all here
in your poem.
Spud
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