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Spoil Of The Coil
Contributed by
alicewhite
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Thursday, 20th February 2014 @ 11:13:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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Arkansa Kansas eagle flight
the spoil of the coil
gravious orbey
gravelled soil,
ah spiritus sanctis et diem
adonai que tu travaille
yonder flock beckens
feathered flock prevails
this rocky road trails
trials and tribulations
story tellers tales
the hero never falters
the hero never fails
the hero on the heroes quest
aquires the holy grail.
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2014-02-20 11:13:38]
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Re: Spoil Of The Coil
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by lostrelic on
Thursday, 20th February 2014 @ 11:18:07 PM AEST
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| The hero never falters, powerful write. Thank you for sharing this. |
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Re: Spoil Of The Coil
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th March 2014 @ 09:34:38 PM AEST
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whoa, love this simply, its complexity, it's the true art form of the poem, contradicts simplifies states the truth and it don't lie.
myth is myth is religion is trials and tribulation
Is coiled like a spring or the planetary motion
gravity, this ones got a lot.
Well done!!! quite well done indeed. his eyes dart back and forth between his comment and the poem simultaneously.
Thank you for this one. I'm liking them all.
Peace! |
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Re: Spoil Of The Coil
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 26th August 2020 @ 11:14:10 PM AEST
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Stroke the monkey until it bites
But ya got to do it just right
The opossum goes down it/'/s hole
Wicky wauky use a long pole
Read the verse unrehearsed
We all deserve are just deserts
Peace..... |
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