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The Turning
Contributed by
TheTimmy56666
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Tuesday, 18th February 2014 @ 07:04:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
mythology
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My rage is growing
On my face it is showing
I clinch my fists
Man I'm really *****
***** that things aren't working
My body uncontrollably shaking
I scream at no one
My mental sanity is done
I throw punch after punch
On the impact my bones crunch
I scream again
This battle I cannot win
My brain feels like it is about to explode
I can't break this mental code
This rage I cannot suppress
My self control becoming less and less
I start to run down an endless road
Trying to break this rage mode
I trip and fall
Now I've lost it all
My mind goes blank
Now I'm done for
I tried to control it
But I couldn't
I feel the hair start to grow
And my hands start to heal
While other bones break
Tendons rip apart then seal
Now I'm a beast of the night
Ready to fight and kill
I've lost all my will
Self control I have no more
Copyright ©
TheTimmy56666
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2014-02-18 19:04:45]
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Re: The Turning
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th February 2014 @ 06:00:06 PM AEST
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| Self-indulgent. Try to think how you might feel this way, and why it might be you and not others. |
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Re: The Turning
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th February 2014 @ 06:33:19 PM AEST
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| AnotherRed... once again your comment is utterly useless :-) as TylerSpeaks said, it really does come off as insecure. If you're having a bad day, maybe you should vent in a poem instead of in the comments..... I liked this poem by the way, thanks for sharing |
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