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I feel, Broken

Contributed by TylerSpeaks on Monday, 17th February 2014 @ 04:29:53 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Broken,

why don't you like me.
I try to be like you because the sin comes easier, and with the fluidity that your hair twists and twirls and is caressed by the wind, while the windows are rolled down in my old car. Why can't I be like you. Why do I feel. Feel positive emotions. Pleasure comes with you, Broken. You are the pale rider. The emissary of loathing, and fake loving the women who fall into my bed. Little do they know, the only one I want to feel is you, Broken. But, with them. It is always a threesome... Because Sorry is always in bed with us. That is who I feel, touching me. Little does she know, that all I feel during sex... Is Sorry. Sorry, you make me call her again, and explain why I don't believe in relationships, because ships sink.

Broken,

Why don't you stay away now. At first I thought I loved you, but now, only you, torment me. Destroy me, to the very depths of my soul, your touch burns, like the fires of hell you are drawing me into.

Broken,

Her name is Brooke, don't come around anymore. I changed the locks to my heart.




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Re: I feel, Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by ArloDisarray on Tuesday, 18th February 2014 @ 04:32:06 PM AEST
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this is very sad, and something that many of us feel at one time or another. it's never easy, but it continually happens throughout our lives. Sometimes it's hard to realize who or what we truly need in our lives and hearts. I hope you find what you're looking for.


Re: I feel, Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 19th February 2014 @ 06:23:14 PM AEST
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Think of the other women for whom you feel nothing, an you might get a grip on life.


Re: I feel, Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 28th July 2014 @ 10:29:17 PM AEST
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I can feel the emotional torture in this flow,
good release.....




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