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Magic cabin
Contributed by
thistle_and_fern
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Monday, 17th February 2014 @ 02:54:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
Holiday Poetry
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I am sitting in a quiet room - a room that is not mine
It is a room thats paid for - by someone some other time.
I should of been here sooner - the magic of this place
I feel a kind of comfort - surrounding in this space
Someone was supposed to be here - to share this room with me
But he had other reasons - and decided he couldnt be
I am glad I chose to bother - to come here all alone
I know it isnt my house - but somehow it feels like home.
One day Ill come on back here - with someone I adore
And share with him this moment - as we sit beside the shore
And I will show him magic - that this place has shown to me
And he will feel it move him - and set his spirit free.
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Re: Magic cabin
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by Sirath on
Monday, 17th February 2014 @ 02:57:29 AM AEST
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Sounds like an enchanting place. I envy you. I just hope that it moves that special person as much as it moves you!
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Re: Magic cabin
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 17th February 2014 @ 05:15:46 PM AEST
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| beautifully written sounds like an enchanting place |
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Re: Magic cabin
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th February 2014 @ 06:39:06 PM AEST
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| It sounds so much like a place for two. |
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Re: Magic cabin
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 27th February 2014 @ 09:04:28 PM AEST
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peaceful and so beautifully written,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Magic cabin
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 28th February 2014 @ 06:36:26 PM AEST
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Wow, this is so wonderful and so moving.
I was lucky enough to visit Lake Taupo a few years ago, so I know perfectly well what you mean. It was a magical place then and always will be.
Amazing write.
I think I will remember the feeling this gave me for a long time.
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Re: Magic cabin
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by Spike on
Wednesday, 29th November 2017 @ 07:04:58 PM AEST
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Lovely tribute -my comment is a little belated, but just read your post and recalled my time there as well. NZ is one of my favourite and most inspiring destinations.
Spike
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