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Eternity

Contributed by FastGuy on Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 09:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Eternity

This is the story of a love I thought was passing
The second story to my life love everlasting

She’s brought me up, and we’ve had our downs
But what is life without some leaps and bounds

It broke my heart to try and let her go
But she lives in me like the way my blood flows

I tried and tried to forget how much she meant
How could I forget how hard we tried, and how much time we spent

She touched me in ways I can only know that this love is real
Too close to me, without her my heart couldn’t deal

4 times a 1000 miles, and I can feel her next to me each night
A Genuine gift for God, I won’t give up without a fight

The effort not taken for granted, I see it and cherish it always
Soon the pain I felt before will only be a memory

Do I know what I’m getting myself into
Sure I do, a ring, a wedding, a kiss, and her fathers consent too

I’ll hold on tight and never let go
To prove to her how much I love her, there’s no extent to what my heart will show

This won’t ever die it will forever be with me
One year, ten years, our love unbreakable throughout eternity

This girl is no longer just a part in my life
She’s my lover, my best friend, and soon to be my wife

How could I think that I could let this beautiful girl fade away
There’s nothing better, no way, I’m forever grateful I have her, undoubtedly

I’ll thank God every day he brought me something so special
The greatest gift looking in her eyes each day and seeing her love overflowing and plentiful

This is the story of a eternal love that’s truly amazing, and wonderful

Copyright Â© FastGuy ... [ 2003-05-18 21:35:00]
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