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Last Rites
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Sunday, 9th February 2014 @ 12:55:36 PM in AEST
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I told you, I'm sicker
My knee-jerk is quicker
Use my machete and pull down your chest like a zipper
Bloody, exposing your ticker, just call me Jane Ripper
Your pleas don't concern me in the least
With knife and fork I'm ready to feast
With a smirk I gaze upon your fearful eyes
Put some tape on your mouth to stifle the cries
You wanted me to be the Bonnie to your Clyde
I'll dress in red- your blood- now come and kiss the bride
What is your last wish? For death to come slow, or come quick
Your response was muffled- say goodbye now- 3, 2... *CLICK*.
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Re: Last Rites
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by jyssvw22 on
Sunday, 9th February 2014 @ 02:15:51 PM AEST
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Impressive how far you have come as a writer. I wish I had a little bit of your talent.
Great write |
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Re: Last Rites
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by emystar on
Sunday, 9th February 2014 @ 02:18:55 PM AEST
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A great piece of work.
fun is good.
Smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Last Rites
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th February 2014 @ 10:45:19 PM AEST
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Geeze, Jane, you've come a long way since May 30 2005 where the bunny part on Cimba turned your stomach. Pulling down chest zippers with a machete? Holy *****!!!
Graphic, awesome clever and witty. A most enjoyable read. |
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Re: Last Rites
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 10th February 2014 @ 01:52:08 AM AEST
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love the way this flows
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Re: Last Rites
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th May 2014 @ 01:16:50 PM AEST
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creepy, raw and eww lol! i am soooooo happy
we are the bestest best bestie friends in the
whole wide world...........
hugs n' love nessa:) |
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Re: Last Rites
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by JaileneRose on
Friday, 25th July 2014 @ 12:14:32 AM AEST
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| haha I loved it |
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