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OLE HOME PLACE
Contributed by
emystar
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Sunday, 9th February 2014 @ 05:41:12 AM in AEST
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Dedicated to family and friends, far and near.
It used to boom with kids
Under Dad and mom's healing care.
Don't lie, be kind to all.
God is each and every where.
The ole home place just sits there
In need of much care.
Memory's just keep flooding
To here from over there.
The yard is grown up but
I'm working slowly on fixing that.
It makes me sad to see it haunting me
It needs to be happy, full, free.
On Holidays family use to
Come many miles around.
We'd cook all night some times
With all kinds of goodies we found.
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emystar
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Re: OLE HOME PLACE
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by softerware on
Sunday, 9th February 2014 @ 01:00:26 PM AEST
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Oh Emy..this brings back so many memories..how delightful and vintage of you!
Neglected houses are sad..I feel so sorry for them..after all the joy and laughter and generations they sheltered within..they surely deserve better!
I love this tribute. On behalf of all the forgotten little homes…THANK you! :)
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Re: OLE HOME PLACE
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th February 2014 @ 10:37:28 PM AEST
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Yes, yes, the house needs to be happy again.
I really liked this. It sorta kinda reminded me of my poem, Hello, I'm House
Woo yeah! |
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Re: OLE HOME PLACE
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 10th February 2014 @ 03:42:33 PM AEST
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I really love the sentimental journey this poem took me on. I like how vividly you described this house, from the overgrown grass to all the heart-warming memories. Even more so, I like how you incorporated the morals of your family. I.e:
Don't lie, be kind to all.
God is each and every where.
Great job Emy.
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Re: OLE HOME PLACE
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 10th February 2014 @ 06:42:07 PM AEST
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| Great poem!!!I can remember all the things about the ol home.Though the new home is kool the ol home has the best memories. |
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Re: OLE HOME PLACE
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by Voices-Ghost on
Saturday, 15th February 2014 @ 10:48:19 PM AEST
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It sounds like a beautiful place Emmy.
Full of memories and love.
Though it may be in need of TLC and time
No matter what the memories will always be in your heart and mind.
Wonderful piece!
Voices-ghost
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Re: OLE HOME PLACE
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 18th February 2014 @ 03:39:38 PM AEST
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A really touching piece, my friend. Looking back is always a pleasant thing for me to do. Great to read you again... I really enjoyed reading this..
Hugs and love..
Jenni :>) |
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Re: OLE HOME PLACE
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 27th February 2014 @ 07:13:12 PM AEST
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oh emy this was heartwarmingly beautiful! brings me lovely memories to way back when,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: OLE HOME PLACE
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by Leoricx on
Sunday, 6th April 2014 @ 05:49:53 PM AEST
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Hey Emy, a fab piece of writing. An old home can evoke so many memories,you've done a great job of catching both the positive and negative swing of emotion those memories can bring with them.
Really makes me think of my nans house. There were a lot if good times had there.
Again, good job ;-) |
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd May 2014 @ 09:10:41 PM AEST
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Always have a soft spot for house poems. The doors open to more than just rooms.
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Re: OLE HOME PLACE
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by reprobate on
Saturday, 17th May 2014 @ 09:10:41 PM AEST
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I found myself wanting more...I wanted to go through the house, room by room and wanted to sit at the dinner table with family and friends. It just left me there standing in the yard feeling as shaggy as the lawn. Sad.
An inviting and delicate piece!
Thanks ever so much for the trip down memory lane! |
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by desciple on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2014 @ 12:30:29 AM AEST
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| amazing write, very nostalgic |
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Re: OLE HOME PLACE
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by colinb on
Sunday, 6th July 2014 @ 05:20:48 PM AEST
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| very heart warming well done |
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Re: OLE HOME PLACE
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by Invierno on
Friday, 22nd August 2014 @ 03:20:39 PM AEST
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great "take me back" piece.
thanks.
Invierno |
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Re: OLE HOME PLACE
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by RussellReinhardt on
Saturday, 6th September 2014 @ 05:27:55 PM AEST
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Hi there Emy
Been some time. I trust you are well. Now this poem makes you guilty of taking me back to when I was a boy of just 3 ;-) let me tell you a bit about it. We lived in a government house wrongly issued to my father as a police constable back in 1970. It was a massive 5 bedroom house that was supposed to be given to a higher ranking officer none the less we got it. I can still remember the address 46 Custeel street Belgravia. Now this here poem of yours takes me back to that house and the time we had there as a family. Most family functions (birthday parties, weddings, funerals ext ext) were hold at this house. A big yard to play in tall very tall trees to climb some 60 to 70 feet high. Some of my most beautiful childhood memories are from this house. Thank you so much for this beautiful poem of yours that reminded me of that time. God bless
Greetings
Rus |
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by The_Phantom on
Wednesday, 7th January 2015 @ 04:22:04 PM AEST
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Loved the read, you write with so much passion. Thank you for allowing us to enjoy your work. Thank you again for all your insightful comments on my work, and I wish you only the best.
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by Pogivic on
Tuesday, 17th March 2015 @ 11:46:04 PM AEST
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| First time I've read your poems and I look foreword to reading more. I love all rhyming poetry. Yours is really good........Vic |
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Re: OLE HOME PLACE
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by desciple on
Monday, 6th April 2015 @ 08:43:49 PM AEST
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| as always your poems seem to take me on journey, I love this piece...thanks for sharing. keep writing |
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Re: OLE HOME PLACE
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 26th February 2018 @ 05:42:04 PM AEST
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| Brings back fond memories- great write! |
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Re: OLE HOME PLACE
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by Durango on
Thursday, 19th April 2018 @ 08:49:00 PM AEST
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the old abode will always stand sturdy in your heart.
very touching work. |
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Re: OLE HOME PLACE
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by WellEyeDo on
Tuesday, 15th May 2018 @ 12:10:44 AM AEST
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| Though it creates an tangible piece to look back on and reminisce. The true beauty of it are the memories that you get play like old tapes in your mind. That smile you get when you close your eyes and are carried back. Thank you for sharing |
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