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Everything is Ok...Until its not
Contributed by
TheDreamer
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Saturday, 8th February 2014 @ 11:34:46 PM in AEST
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The weird thing about life is,
Everything seems OK until it's not,
You're always changing, Yet always feel the same,
Things are special until they aren't
You want to be someone until you are who you are,
You want to grow up until you're old,
You want to be in love until it drives you mad,
Then you want it back when it leaves,
You want to go somewhere until you get there,
With every piece of understanding,
The world just becomes more confusing,
With every memory a sense of regret,
Will it makes sense someday?
Maybe,
Maybe not,
But what is evident now
Is that every thing seems OK, and then it's not
Copyright ©
TheDreamer
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2014-02-08 23:34:46]
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Re: Everything is Ok...Until its not
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by softerware on
Sunday, 9th February 2014 @ 12:11:34 AM AEST
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This is very cleverly done! I like the way you lead the reader along the path you want them to follow..and before we know it..we're right back where we started! Delightfully crafted!
Thank you for sharing!
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Re: Everything is Ok...Until its not
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by Senates on
Sunday, 9th February 2014 @ 02:08:57 AM AEST
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Love how this poem flows,
Very good read. ^__^
- senates |
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Re: Everything is Ok...Until its not
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by emystar on
Sunday, 9th February 2014 @ 04:24:18 AM AEST
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Awesome writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Everything is Ok...Until its not
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by WhitePlacid on
Sunday, 9th February 2014 @ 11:06:45 AM AEST
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| "You're always changing, Yet always feel the same" - a nice line...something to think about! |
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Re: Everything is Ok...Until its not
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by Sammarie307 on
Monday, 10th February 2014 @ 01:29:22 PM AEST
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| Very good!! |
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Re: Everything is Ok...Until its not
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by tin on
Sunday, 23rd March 2014 @ 02:55:16 AM AEST
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| Ignorance certainly is bliss, though there's something to be said for those of us who simply won't accept ignorance in ourselves. |
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Re: Everything is Ok...Until its not
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th May 2014 @ 06:07:46 PM AEST
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| well woven words, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Everything is Ok...Until its not
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 5th July 2014 @ 10:25:26 PM AEST
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The title drew me to read this. My former Principal, (God rest his soul) always said that to his staff!
Clever writing showing the facts of like!!!
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Re: Everything is Ok...Until its not
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by Invierno on
Thursday, 10th July 2014 @ 01:01:51 PM AEST
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I Like this, Dreamer. As above commented, cleverly written. It could stand to be tweaked and toyed with, but what poem can't?
Great concept, observations and questions.
Well done,
Invierno |
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