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what the hell just happened
Contributed by
jyssvw
on
Saturday, 8th February 2014 @ 07:22:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I
she struggles with
tormented thoughts
a stroke of genius
turned to a fit of bad luck
you see,
the love ran out
her soul was left empty
some speculate
she just wasnt ready
once she left
she knew she was gone for good
dreams forever dead
she tried all she could
to fly
visibly determined
she wouldnt waver
she remained important
she stole the souls from sleeping ghosts
beating back monsters of seething hope
a plastic stick for a sword
she thinks out-loud to herself
should I be concerned?
shouldnt I be a little worried, if nothing else?
affairs to pass the time
formal events to wear a tie
a sequence of floral patterns set to blow her mind
she sees the world around her
in invisible time
she contemplates the wonders
marvels at the randomness
of a scum turned philanthropist
of something
truly altruistic
she buttons her mouth
applies a shiny coating of red lipstick
she would never be denied
pleasures this ridiculous
an out- of- body
experiences
a certain sweetness seems to run throughout her
tasty supple skin
she undresses
slowly
her seductive dance begins
she breathes
the aroma of peace
she sucks it all in
swirls it all around
gargles it all down
her fears are left deceased
buried 35 feet
down in the bottomless ground
covered with shrubbery and firmly planted trees
she opens the window wide
sticks her head outside
her warm body hides
secrets of a fanciful life
her voice collides
heart and soul combine
she is more alive
nothing here to contrive
real as her glow
she takes it hard
and slow
so?
who are you to judge?
II
tempers will rise
the perpetual smooth ride
commences
then is swiftly upended
without pretenses
no attempts attempted
to make amends
no more than fading fake frozen friends
she waves
being brave
an affront to the fear she can not escape
she continues to take and take
lust is what she craves
buried deep in a cave
blackness shadows the truth
evasive and apparently aloof
she says nothing important
her ignorance is our living proof
she dishes
pain with no purpose
a rush to the head
stars spin
sleep tight in death
unconscious
life resumes
gasoline to comfort the bruise
black and blue
vaseline to lubricate the mood
rocks chill the booze
romantic and hidden
the white side of the moon
subdued
tranquility ensues
everything soft
at all costs
she avoids what was brought forth
for in the delivery
comes the moment where all is lost
fallen to pieces
shattered lives
battered mornings
dreary eyes
the tide
turns
footsteps churn
the perpetrator plays with fire
eventually she gets burned
forced to pay her dues
uptight and loose
serenity hung from the noose
the chair kicked out
choking on fading moments
and smoggy exhaust fumes
as her life becomes her torment
her story
yesterdays ragged news
perspective skews
bias views
subdued
returned when refused
mentally abused
justly accused
punished
for breaking very single one of gods rules
spanked in the nude
admonished
for lurking
interrupting and being ravishingly rude
scavenging for scattered rotten food
secluded
a monster on the loose
delirious and confused
hide your children
lock your doors
load your weapons
this is war
she has nothing to lose
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Copyright ©
jyssvw
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2014-02-08 19:22:14]
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Re: what the hell just happened
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by emystar on
Sunday, 9th February 2014 @ 06:28:20 AM AEST
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I realy don't know what just happened but this is a very thought provoking write.
Smile, Blessings,
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Re: what the hell just happened
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by TheDreamer on
Sunday, 9th February 2014 @ 05:21:03 PM AEST
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A very good write, just be careful for grammar (Wasnt = Wasn't).
Still wonderful though. Keep writing. |
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Re: what the hell just happened
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 10th February 2014 @ 05:00:42 PM AEST
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Wow. Just. WOW !
I am always surprised and flattered beyond belief when you say you wish you could write like me. Especially when you knock my socks right off with a standout piece like this, that has so. many. layers. This unfolded like a story. The detail and imagery is incredible. Fantastic job. I salute you, and I will continue to be inspired by gifted writers such as yourself.
~Scorp
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Re: what the hell just happened
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 24th May 2014 @ 10:11:54 AM AEST
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wow and wow! beautiful style, flows like a river,
unique and there's no way i could have stopped
reading this, what the hell just happened-
i read one hell of a poem!
hugs n' love nessa
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