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Ruby’s Counting Stars
Contributed by
spike
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Saturday, 8th February 2014 @ 06:50:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Ruby’s counting stars tonight
heaven’s baubles, hot and bright
eyes a-blazing, sheer delight,
diamonds twinkling in her sight
Ruby’s breathless, 1-2-3
where else would she want to be?
squeals of sheer reverie,
adorn her visage, can’t you see…
she’s hoping for that passing flight
a falling star across the night
to wish I may, wish I might,
a final sharing of last light
our Ruby’s got no more to live
all she’s done is give and give
if I could I’d give her mine,
for Ruby’s run out all her time
try and try with all our might
some hearts forget just how to fight
a final kiss, then goodnight,
Ruby’s with the stars tonight.
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spike
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2014-02-08 18:50:36]
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Re: Ruby’s Counting Stars
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by softerware on
Sunday, 9th February 2014 @ 12:43:33 AM AEST
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Ruby is a lucky lady to be so well remembered!
"A final kiss and then goodnight; Ruby's with the stars tonight!"…Great ending..taking us back to the beginning.
this has a nice easy to read rhythm..and that is anything but "easy" to accomplish!
Please take a moment to share your gift by reading others poetry and commenting. It will mean as much to them as it does to you, and perhaps your voice will be there just when they need to hear it most. Thank you..and please keep writing!
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Re: Ruby’s Counting Stars
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by emystar on
Sunday, 9th February 2014 @ 06:31:18 AM AEST
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Very beautiful write for Ruby's memory.
huggs,Blessings,
emy
So sorry for the loss. |
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Re: Ruby’s Counting Stars
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by spud on
Tuesday, 4th March 2014 @ 04:31:15 AM AEST
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Jaunty, but tragic. I suspect there's a long story
behind the words that the rest of humanity could
relate to. Fine words, Poet - and I sense that
Ruby was well-deserving of such tribute.
Spud
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Re: Ruby’s Counting Stars
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th April 2014 @ 11:46:07 PM AEST
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beautifully written, so sad at the end; *sniff*
hugs n' love nessa |
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