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The Killer
Contributed by
senates
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Saturday, 8th February 2014 @ 03:02:16 PM in AEST
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The number one principle was to never get caught,
He did not want to sit in that prison and rot,
For he was the monster that people feared,
As some of those people's blood was smeared,
But even he wondered about that place,
Where he could be himself and even efface,
So he turned himself in,
It was all over the news,
He gave the feds an offer they couldn't possibly refuse,
The killer was happy and all was well,
He was finally going down to the place they call hell.
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2014-02-08 15:02:16]
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Re: The Killer
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by softerware on
Sunday, 9th February 2014 @ 12:51:41 AM AEST
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Good story! I enjoyed working my way to the finale! I get the feeling you enjoyed writing it too!!
Please would you take a moment to read and encourage another poet on the site? Your comments will mean as much to them as the comments you hope to get. No one gets paid to read or review…we all do it for one another!
Keep writing; you have a knack for weaving a story!
softerware
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Re: The Killer
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by Sammy22nd on
Sunday, 9th February 2014 @ 10:02:31 PM AEST
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| Nice poem I really enjoyed reading it I read it more than once. |
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Re: The Killer
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 10th February 2014 @ 02:05:48 AM AEST
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Like the story
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the way it was written. |
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Re: The Killer
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Sunday, 23rd November 2014 @ 09:35:05 PM AEST
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| Agree with unknown, great flow here. |
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