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The Storm
Contributed by
vydana
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Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 06:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The sky so blue, clear and crisp,
But in the distance I see
A dark cloud coming near,
Lightning and rain that it will bring
Down upon this earth, I fear.
The rain of one cloud I can withstand,
But as I look into the endlessness of the sky
I see another and another and another,
What do I do? How do I survive?
The rain, the wind,
The thunder, the lightening,
There is so much to fight, and so little of me.
I must run, I must find shelter and help.
Alone in this meadow, once shining bright,
Now dark, cold, and wet, I am alone,
There is no one, there is nothing.
The rain beating down upon me,
The wind blowing so hard against me,
This wind will carry me away
To a place I do not know,
To a place more dark and dismal than this,
I must grab hold; I must not let it take me,
I look to my left and to my right,
There is nothing, there is no one.
I plant my feet firm into the wet ground.
I wait, I hope, I pray, I stand.
I feel my weight being lifted,
As I am carried away.
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Re: The Storm
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by Listener on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 07:22:20 PM AEST
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I wish for you better days... I know the feeling. It was a good read!
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Re: The Storm
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Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 07:22:32 PM AEST
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I wish for you better days... I know the feeling. It was a good read!
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Re: The Storm
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by lilch4ever on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 07:57:23 PM AEST
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| That was very good. I feel that way lot these days. Just hang in there. Lovely write. |
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Re: The Storm
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by taffimai on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 08:04:35 PM AEST
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| wonderful imagery -I'm only sorry you have to feel such pain to create such a poem. But at least you are harnessing your trobles as best you can and using them as inspiration. I wish you strength and blue skys, all the best -Taffi |
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Re: The Storm
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by shelby on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 08:51:02 PM AEST
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A beautiful piece of work here. I'm sorry that things are hard for you right now. hang in there!!Better days are coming your way, I promise!!
Michelle |
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