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Trivial
Contributed by
senates
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Friday, 7th February 2014 @ 09:59:56 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Those of ignorance,
Those of knowledge,
They wash up on the shores of humanity,
Only to be revived,
Void of the gifts that are ignorance and knowledge,
Knowing nothing yet,
Knowing everything,
Living for the questions,
Dying for the answers.
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Re: Trivial
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th February 2014 @ 11:49:48 PM AEST
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Nicely done. I especially like this line:
They wash up on the shores of humanity
Very good job...especially for a first poem!
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Re: Trivial
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by softerware on
Saturday, 8th February 2014 @ 01:32:57 AM AEST
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Your first poem? Really?
I wouldn't have thought so…
Love the conclusion:
Living for the questions, dying for the answers!
I especially like that you have given us the recipe but left us to draw our own conclusions!
that is very flattering to your reader! And endearing!
Well done…hope you keep writing!
PS: I didn't know this when I started here, but it is a courtesy to (1) thank those who will comment on your work, and (2) contribute by reading and commenting on others poems.
Welcome to YPDC!
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Re: Trivial
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by softerware on
Saturday, 8th February 2014 @ 01:37:40 AM AEST
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One last thought…
you have no reason to apologize for your work.
You become your self-image.
Make it worthwhile!
No excuses…you are splendid!
softerware
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Re: Trivial
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by emystar on
Saturday, 8th February 2014 @ 04:36:50 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC
Really good writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Trivial
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by emystar on
Sunday, 9th February 2014 @ 04:14:18 AM AEST
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Awesome writing. You have the raw, natural talant for poetry. You either got it or don't and you do.
Blessings, huggs, smiles,
emy
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Re: Trivial
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 10th February 2014 @ 02:08:40 AM AEST
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'Living for the questions,
Dying for the answers."
those two lines
so true
so powerful... |
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