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How I should have loved you.
Contributed by
iodinelove
on
Sunday, 2nd February 2014 @ 11:58:49 PM in AEST
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Just before the rain begins
Dark clouds open intermittently
To reveal the blush of a red sky
Columns of light lance the opacity
Of a murky horizon
Threatening to shine through
Refusing to be deterred, the rain lunges
Mingling with the light of a spring morning
The darkness of its own dawn
As a child I fell into a deep depression
Opened in the sand
Fear overcame me
I cried, and clawed at the walls of the pit
I could hear the tide growing closer
The water sputtering over shale and sand
Until at once I was lifted
Into the steady hands of my father
Chuckling softly at my fear
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2014-02-02 23:58:49]
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Re: How I should have loved you.
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 25th February 2014 @ 08:16:45 AM AEST
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It's good that your father was there to rescue you.
I'd hate to have missed out in this great writing.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: How I should have loved you.
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 21st May 2014 @ 12:54:49 AM AEST
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beautiful, sweet and nostalgic,
hugs n' love nessa |
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