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The World’s Wide Open
Contributed by
Drapes
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Sunday, 2nd February 2014 @ 05:48:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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She listens to the sun rise
With a smile in her eyes,
And she thinks of all the guys
She’s pushed aside
To be living from a suitcase
In a new place.
This is her time to come alive.
Her hair tangles in the western wind,
Exposing an innocent grin
Planted on solid sun-brushed skin
That’s been toughened by eastern sins,
Deception and heartbreaks;
But she still knows how freedom tastes,
And this is where her life begins.
With a sagebrush bundle in her hand
Her breath is stolen by the Grand.
The eagles circle, swoop, and land,
The ground is pulsing where she stands.
She loves to feel
The energy heal
And she’s learned to breathe again.
August 2013
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Drapes
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2014-02-02 17:48:11]
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Re: The World’s Wide Open
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by iodinelove on
Monday, 3rd February 2014 @ 12:08:19 AM AEST
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Re: The World’s Wide Open
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by Spike on
Monday, 3rd February 2014 @ 06:09:50 AM AEST
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Excellent. It gets better and more fluid with each read.Lovely imagery, the largely undescribed but referenced vista as allegory for the subject's own emancipation, her own new day awakening. Yum. thanks for that!
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