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Bruised
Contributed by
thistle_and_fern
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Monday, 27th January 2014 @ 03:11:39 AM in AEST
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I am feeling kind of stupid as I lay upon my bed
I wonder what Im thinking here inside my muddled head
I need to pull my head in now and never speak my mind
I beat myself continuously and treat myself unkind
Everymtime I fail me and my immature heart
When I open up the padlocks and pull the chains apart
I need to build a prison now to keep my heart intact
And never leave open to an unprovoked attack
So please dont tell me stories of the things that are not true
Id rather hear the truth instead of lies that make me blue
So keep your insincerity away from my bruised heart
Ive had enough of brokenness thats tore my soul apart
If you wish to play my feelings to keep yourself amused
Id rather you just walked away then leave me so confused
Perhaps I have been shattered more to ever trust again
coz when I start to trust you all I ever get is pain
I fail at love I fail at life I really am a mess
And being played emotionally just makes me fail the test
So just be honest, just be true for one time in your life
And let my heart forget you once you remove your knife.
My destiny is clear now as I try to find some rest
my dating days are over now I think that this is best.
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Re: Bruised
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 30th January 2014 @ 12:51:07 AM AEST
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In answer to you question, yes!
A very sad poem but don't beat yourself up and never give up. (I know, unsolicited advice). It's just that not everyone is the same.
Best regards,
Tim |
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Re: Bruised
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by Blackheart on
Friday, 31st January 2014 @ 11:48:06 AM AEST
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| Amazing how I can say the same thing about myself, you pretty much spoke for me with this poem! Beautifully written too, thank you for this poem |
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Re: Bruised
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd May 2014 @ 05:21:04 PM AEST
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this is sad but so beautifully written, you have
taken your pain and made the most exquisite
poem,
hugs n' love nessa |
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