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the person i admire
Contributed by
maha_ak49
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Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
MothersDayPoems
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you introduced me to the world,
you showed me two paths in life,
you fed me with the milk of wisdom,
you cussioned me with care blanket,
you calms me with with soft tone,
your talks are special,
you stays at my heart,
you have no replacement,
you're,
the person i admire most,
and,
teh only gods angel
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Re: the person i admire
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 05:55:26 PM AEST
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Maha, this is a very loving and lovely tribute to your Mom... It could use some editing tho...for spelling and grammatical errors.. (Pm me if you need help)
Thanks for sharing it..
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Re: the person i admire
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 11:24:35 PM AEST
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A lovely tribute to her, cherish her always!
Christina |
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Re: the person i admire
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 09:19:30 PM AEST
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| ~precious~ |
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Re: the person i admire
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by soul_je on
Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 10:30:02 AM AEST
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| Truly wonderful my dear friend. A very well writen one (except those spelling and grammar errors). |
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Re: the person i admire
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by maha_ak49 on
Friday, 23rd May 2003 @ 01:59:41 AM AEST
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sorry for the typing errors.i wont do that again
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