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Be kind to me.
Contributed by
JimKoz
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Thursday, 23rd January 2014 @ 09:35:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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There's just something about her.
She has my heart running a bit faster.
Maybe it's all in my head, too much romance.
But this feeling won't stop, it's in a continuous state of trance.
You know when a song comes on and you just have to dance?
I know it hurts to have your heart broken in two.
Overwhelming feelings of sadness and blue.
But maybe this time it will be different; Insanity.
This heart has been through a ton, keep my walls high so no one can see.
If I tear them down love, please be kind to me.
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JimKoz
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2014-01-23 21:35:44]
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Re: Be kind to me.
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by softerware on
Saturday, 25th January 2014 @ 02:39:56 AM AEST
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It's a quandry…leave walls up, lock love out.
Let walls down…OUCH!
glad you are reminding us to come out from behind, and that we have to trust to get trust back.
Like your thoughts, back and forth, yes and no..
so like most of us make decisions!
Love is a dance! thanks for pushing us out on the mental dance floor!
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Re: Be kind to me.
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by thistle_and_fern on
Monday, 27th January 2014 @ 02:05:46 AM AEST
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Yes such a quandary for sure
Do we let our walls down and risk being hurt? or do we keep them up and suffer lonliness
Loved this. Thank you for sharing |
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