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Still
Contributed by
Dagger-of-the-mind
on
Thursday, 23rd January 2014 @ 09:25:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A music as beautiful and blue as her eyes
Full of pain in his beliefs
Came from this small room
That meant the world to him, being his escape from reality
He played and listened
His mind spoke better through his hands
His feelings in three minutes
Gave her insight to his life
In his life he needed two things only
Her and his guitar
But that he wasn't strong enough to carry
A river of joy and grief
Then she left the room of life and he was alone
He cried for her
His voice echoed in that empty room
And he was alone
Just him and his guitar without strings
And the music was silent...
His thoughts were so bright when he played
So pretty and colorful
Nothing in the world could provoke him
He was perfect as anyone else
Music was his resort, a medicine for his disease
He had everything under control, everything was fine
Day in, day out he thanked God for his hands
Music was his sanity
He played louder and louder
But time wasn't on his side
He could hardly sense his fingers, but he could feel them
It got very quiet
And the music was silent...
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Re: Still
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by alicewhite on
Friday, 24th January 2014 @ 02:09:26 PM AEST
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| what a beautiful story your poem tells, I love the musical theme, lovelyx |
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Re: Still
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by thistle_and_fern on
Monday, 27th January 2014 @ 02:09:38 AM AEST
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Gorgeous
You pain pictures with your words |
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Re: Still
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by potentialpoet96 on
Tuesday, 28th January 2014 @ 12:31:52 AM AEST
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| This was really beautiful. You have such talent. I love the story that this told, there was so much beauty and pain behind your words. I really enjoyed this. |
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Re: Still
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 27th February 2014 @ 08:37:55 PM AEST
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tragically beautifully written, may the music muse return,
hugs n' love nessa |
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