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Rollercoaster Ride
Contributed by
Sammarie307
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Wednesday, 22nd January 2014 @ 02:06:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Emotions running with highs and lows…
Twists and turns and decisions to make…
Stomach-churning butterfly kicks…
Headache-inducing stressful situations…
Heart-pumping conversations…
Can’t you see this is hurting her?
Just look, her heart is breaking.
Can’t you see she needs your support?
Just look, this rejection is killing her.
She is strong & can handle anything,
But this is almost too much to bear.
There is so much she can’t say to you.
There is so much she can’t share.
There are so many hints that have been dropped.
And so many hints you failed to pick up.
She tries so hard to be perfect.
She tries so hard to impress.
She couldn’t handle to let you down.
She couldn’t cope to disappoint.
She wants to make you proud.
She wants you to prove she isn’t replaceable.
She worries you don’t see her hard work.
She worries you don’t care.
She is afraid to fall.
She is afraid to fail.
She wants to trust your words.
She wants you to trust her as well.
Drowning in her own insecurities.
She needs help to save her from herself.
She is working even harder now.
To prove you made the right choice.
Her passion is stronger than her fear.
Her journey is just beginning.
She is where she is meant to be.
She wants you to believe in her.
She wants to know how you truly feel.
She wants to tell you all her fears.
Emotions running with highs and lows…
Twists and turns of enthusiastic fate…
Stomach-churning butterfly flutters…
Headache-inducing nerves of excitement…
Heart-pumping passion…
SMH 1/18/14
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Sammarie307
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2014-01-22 14:06:17]
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Re: Rollercoaster Ride
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by alicewhite on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2014 @ 02:47:32 PM AEST
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| this is really good, you describe this womans suffering and self doubts so well , your words truly paint a picture, x |
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Re: Rollercoaster Ride
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by emystar on
Sunday, 9th February 2014 @ 06:06:04 AM AEST
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Welcome *to YPDC.
I think mostly all women can relate to this write.
It's a real awesome write.
Blessings,
emy. |
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