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Girl Next Door
Contributed by
CMOLINA
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Sunday, 19th January 2014 @ 02:02:10 AM in AEST
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all her lovers
are raging
and mean.
bruises and tears
rearranging
her dreams.
all she needs is me...
or is it just me?
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CMOLINA
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2014-01-19 02:02:10]
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Re: Girl Next Door
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by softerware on
Sunday, 19th January 2014 @ 08:32:46 PM AEST
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Boy, can many relate to this wonderful little work. what can we do?How can we help? If she only knew!!
Your words raise so many questions.
Wish we had the answers.
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Re: Girl Next Door
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by xHeathenx on
Friday, 11th September 2015 @ 03:22:00 AM AEST
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You uploaded this on my brother's birthday. :)
It's just you unfortunately. That's not to say you can't offer the love she's looking for, but by wanting to offer that love, that's likely what you focus on, either more than, or ignoring your drive in respects to intrinsic instincts in regards to relationships.
Don't feel bad, all of us "nice guys" are there at some point. It's just a question of when you learn why that's not so good, and move into balancing it with your primitive side. |
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Re: Girl Next Door
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by ming on
Saturday, 12th September 2015 @ 10:28:45 PM AEST
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Your short shake-you-up words/poems delight some dark other person inside me...
ming |
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