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Words no one will read (the sixth dream)
Contributed by
iodinelove
on
Saturday, 18th January 2014 @ 10:48:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The sixth dream
I have walked many paths
I have stumbled
Struggled
I have been cleansed
By of a torrent of rain
Washing away streetlights and cars
I have seen friends pass
Broken by needles
Loveless and alone
I have held a man as he cried
For the hurt he committed
And I have been held
How rigid and hard
These lines have grown
How sloppy and bland
I have hurt someone I love
Just to hurt them
I have plead for humanity
And I have spit on the supplication
Of another's love
I have called her whore
Dredged up every dirty secret
I have cast my own love away
The sixth dream is written
With words no one will read
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iodinelove
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2014-01-18 22:48:51]
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Re: Words no one will read (the sixth dream)
(User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on
Saturday, 18th January 2014 @ 11:35:14 PM AEST
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If we had to check off each revelation you make, most of us would probably have quite a row of checkmarks! I went back for a re-read to immerse in the emotion and not just the thought.
Enjoyed this very much.
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Re: Words no one will read (the sixth dream)
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by GloomyBlu on
Sunday, 19th January 2014 @ 02:25:12 AM AEST
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| what words will you read today? |
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