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Tears
Contributed by
kathyjeanp
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Saturday, 18th January 2014 @ 12:44:39 PM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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Tears
Hopelessness and despair
in a drop of pain does fall,
from my eyes along my face
treasured memories I recall.
Alone I suffer in silence,
my hearts breaks no one knows,
I have to keep pressing onward
my future God only holds.
So many obstacles in my way
will I ever overcome,
is the light at the end of the tunnel
a sign of victory for the battles I've won?
The salty stain remains reminding
me of the fight,
I'm a tiny mustard seed, a grain
of sand in this journey called life.
Tears sometimes unnoticed
by those who cry like me,
will never fall in vain
someone always sees.
The one who placed me here
and knows what lies ahead
tears are diamonds of a different facet
rainbows of love that will always be shed.
Written By Kathy J Parenteau
Copyright © Jan 2014
All Rights Reserved
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kathyjeanp
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2014-01-18 12:44:39]
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Re: Tears
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th January 2014 @ 10:43:33 PM AEST
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Does someone always see? Not sure I agree with that.
A very, very emotive well written poem. The plural on heart sort of confused me but then I just may be dim or it's a typo.
Thank you for an enjoyable read. I could really feel the emotion and that's what poetry is about.
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Re: Tears
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by speedy on
Sunday, 19th January 2014 @ 07:25:14 PM AEST
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Sometimes the tears fall inside - those are the tears no person can see. Sometimes the pain & scars are internal.
Great write.
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