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Smiling through the blue
Contributed by
shelby
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Thursday, 16th January 2014 @ 09:45:31 PM in AEST
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I tried to fight it off
but today just was not the day.
Owning all the emotions
walking in the gray.
Heart a bit heavy
a couple tears or two
fight,fight it off
smiling through the blue.
I miss you little one
and that I cannot deny.
Today if I feel like it
I think I will just cry.
Winter sky all ugly
tonight the cold fog is rolling in.
Wrapping tight around me
suffocating my tiny grin.
The blue sky couldn't fight it off
the sun just didn't make it through.
The weather like my heart today
is feeling a chill of blue.
That is ok, I wont deny it now
healing has its way.
Sometimes you smile through the blue,
and days like today
you just dont.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2014-01-16 21:45:31]
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Re: Smiling through the blue
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th January 2014 @ 09:52:59 PM AEST
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| yeah... I like this one |
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Re: Smiling through the blue
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th January 2014 @ 06:36:09 AM AEST
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A fine expression of how, on certain days, we just can't shake off our blues. 'A little grin' says it all. That's sometimes as far as we can get.
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Re: Smiling through the blue
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 24th February 2014 @ 07:53:04 PM AEST
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| Hey, Shells, we all have days like this.... well described though.... |
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Re: Smiling through the blue
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 27th February 2014 @ 07:20:30 PM AEST
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hard when one misses someone then the day seems to fit the mood, beautifully written my friend,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Smiling through the blue
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 28th February 2014 @ 06:21:48 PM AEST
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Wonderfully descriptive and intense.
You pulled me into the poem and I was soon lost in the fog too, but happy to remain there until the end.
Keep up the good work.
Steve |
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Re: Smiling through the blue
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by weemick on
Friday, 4th July 2014 @ 06:36:50 PM AEST
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| Hi Michelle, a wonderful write on the subject. We all have our down days, Luckily I can say they are dew and far between for me. I shall walk through this blue day with you, but one thing, no one Is ever blue for long when I'm around, sorry. Wouldn't It be something If we could just be happy all the time, we're human, that means this can never be, An excellent write Michelle. |
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