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Chalkboard Fingernails
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
on
Thursday, 16th January 2014 @ 01:14:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Reconnect me to something I never knew
Once I find the light
It will guide me back to you
I feel safe in the night
Darkness obstructs my view
When the moment feels right
And the world spins tight
Incapacitated,
I am revived
I am someone who
Has become himself
Despite your apathy
The agony
Knowing too much
And never enough
You called me
Your true love
I embraced your words
Now
Give me a hug
I empathize
With those who cannot see
With whom should I walk?
I talk
In circles
To myself
I scream
At bare walls
In hopes
Of releasing
Some sort of smoke
I am
An everlasting joke
Laugh if you will
Repudiate me still
My claim to pain
A desire to regain
All that was stolen
As I slept
As I wept
As I kept
In my head
That night
We kissed in the rain
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Copyright ©
Jyssvw22
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2014-01-16 13:14:26]
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Re: Chalkboard Fingernails
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by shelby on
Thursday, 16th January 2014 @ 09:51:34 PM AEST
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Powerful write and loved the style.Nicely done.
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Re: Chalkboard Fingernails
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 1st February 2014 @ 09:42:32 PM AEST
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Powerful use of imagery in your wording, without overdoing it. The emotion felt real to me, and this made for a highly visual read. Even the title makes it's own stand-alone statement.
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