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Goodbye Dreamer Go To Sleep
Contributed by
CARAAAAA
on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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And imprisoned against the seamless
night sky that didnt seem so stark
she was forced to stare at the splendour
of the serenpiditous stars
Linking arms blending into the romantic regalia of fusion
But in her head forlorn despair and confusion
Infatuation knowing no intuition
as she fixates her eyes
like pealing bells
inconspicuous at this glimmer of a star
it dilates and then winks innocuously again
Then elusive it fades ....
The lights are too bright so they glaze and penetrate
Wean her away
Because this lifetime glimpses no supernova
Copyright ©
CARAAAAA
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2003-05-18 13:05:00]
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Re: Goodbye Dreamer Go To Sleep
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by tease_whizz on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 01:49:39 PM AEST
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| an interesting concept, beautifully expressed. i love the imagery. this is a really vivid and visual poem with an interesting final line that hints at the futility of life. keep them coming, Kate x |
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Re: Goodbye Dreamer Go To Sleep
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by The_Nameless_One on
Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 05:51:11 AM AEST
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haha thats depressing
but i actually like this |
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