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Haunted
Contributed by
zeberdee
on
Tuesday, 14th January 2014 @ 02:24:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Moving sneakily and nimbly past trees
Through the wind as a cold breeze
Quickly closing in on my periphery
Ravaging my room, and hitting me
With clenched fist I slam the wall
I've gone through so much, still it seeks me
Here secluded in a room it comes to me as a call
Haunting shivers down my spine
I've gone through enough leave me I am fine
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zeberdee
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2014-01-14 14:24:05]
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Re: Haunted
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 15th January 2014 @ 10:01:18 AM AEST
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| i like the way this is written. very mysterious... great job |
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Re: Haunted
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by dvtpdw on
Wednesday, 15th January 2014 @ 05:42:07 PM AEST
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| Your words take the reader upon a unnamed, unmanned adventure. The danger is felt yet no one knows where to look. Strength is found yet undefined. So very much liked this. Great write, P |
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Re: Haunted
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 28th April 2014 @ 07:56:34 PM AEST
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great images, a beautiful little gem here,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Haunted
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Saturday, 7th June 2014 @ 11:04:34 PM AEST
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| Short, sweet, and powerful. the way all poetry should be. Words are tools and the wise use them effectively. Great job |
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Re: Haunted
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 8th June 2014 @ 08:12:34 PM AEST
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| I really like the way this flows....... |
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Re: Haunted
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 12th February 2015 @ 01:15:31 PM AEST
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I like the relentless pace in the first half, each word like an assault.
Then it grinds to a halt near the end, almost as if the opponent (victim?) lay defeated. Powerful.
Of course I like the title as well. Thanks for posting.
~Scorp |
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Re: Haunted
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st June 2015 @ 11:57:27 PM AEST
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| Very eerie. Nicely written |
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