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Life is strange
Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
on
Tuesday, 14th January 2014 @ 12:54:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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threw all my life
what I can say
my worlds come close
I've lost my way
always wondering
if I might see
the one who excepts
me being me
I've made my children hate me
not knowing what to do
it was based on reality
& there dreams coming true
the way that I was
I can never take back
back then I was a train
that ran out of track
but there little brother
see's me in a different way
he's whats left of my world
so this I must say
I am his inspiration
I'm what he wants to be
he's intirely my world
& the only life i see
Roy Randolph Andrews AKA (thehotshotpoet)
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thehotshotpoet
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2014-01-14 12:54:48]
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Re: Life is strange
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by dvtpdw on
Wednesday, 15th January 2014 @ 05:46:11 PM AEST
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| The path to tomorrow is often paved with the bones of yesterday. Chewing on them often leaves a bitter taste. Your write takes the reader to yesterday, yet gives such hope in the tomorrow. Strong write, P |
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Re: Life is strange
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 23rd May 2014 @ 05:41:45 PM AEST
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honest, heartfelt and solid, beautiful style and flow,
hugs n' love nessa |
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