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The walls
Contributed by
Tina15
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Monday, 13th January 2014 @ 06:21:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
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People tell me I won't make it.
People say I'm nothing.
I built a wall to bock them out
To block everything out.
I got lonely
so I let you in
but you stabbed me in the back.
I built more walls
walls of fear,
fear of being persecuted
not welcomed.
After a while I realized I'll never be happy with these walls up.
So I tore them down.
I let people in.
I saw a light ,
it was a bright light ,
a light of joy and peace.
Now I am happy.
Now I am free!
Copyright ©
Tina15
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2014-01-13 18:21:35]
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Re: The walls
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by Pycon on
Monday, 13th January 2014 @ 06:27:10 PM AEST
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| Beautiful. I can relate 10 fold. Keep it up. |
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Re: The walls
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by emystar on
Monday, 13th January 2014 @ 07:24:59 PM AEST
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Another very good write. It doesn't matter what someone thinks about you not making it. It's your personal opinion of who you let in or block out.
Huggs,
emy
great job with these |
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Re: The walls
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th January 2014 @ 11:25:44 PM AEST
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| Awesome poem! I can definitely relate to the idea of trying to block out everything. I also love the happy ending of the poem! |
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Re: The walls
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by femyed on
Tuesday, 14th January 2014 @ 05:21:56 AM AEST
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| A good write, thoughful. Follow the passion, keep the drive. |
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Re: The walls
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by thezenmonkey on
Tuesday, 14th January 2014 @ 08:30:16 AM AEST
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| beautiful! |
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