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Splain Please
Contributed by
JackM
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Monday, 13th January 2014 @ 12:44:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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What the hell happened?
I can’t explain you
Makes no sense
All I did was open the door, and there you were
You came from the other side of the World, from some faraway land
To me, you’re of some star lite constellation, perhaps just from God’s hand
Your beauty, your allure, that you inside there
These precious things, this man sure thinks rare
I know you exist, I saw you in her eyes
It’s you, I know, alone in the dark when you cry
Some aspects of you, my memory has froze
Stars on your foot, and your fun little nose
Why you? Why now? The Moon doesn’t care
About the love I sought, but which was never there
So now, someone please tell me, what do I do?
With this exciting enigma I know as you?
Copyright ©
JackM
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2014-01-13 12:44:09]
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Re: Splain Please
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by emystar on
Monday, 13th January 2014 @ 05:03:43 PM AEST
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I hear you. there's almost nothing that hurts worse as in pain as loving someone that want love you back .
This is really good writing. Just hang in there and take it one day at a time. At times we just have to cut our loses and try real hard to move on.
I don't know you but in this case more than likely the problem is the other 0ther and you are the victim of circumstance. Most impotent keep writing and your own healing will come.
Big huggs, blessings,
emy
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Re: Splain Please
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 10th June 2014 @ 08:45:36 PM AEST
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this is absolutely beautiful, from title to last line
intriguing, love how you popped the moon in
there too, the moon always has an opinion on
everything... loving an enigma, how enchanting...
hugs n' love nessa |
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