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Ring-Ring
Contributed by
Veronica
on
Friday, 10th January 2014 @ 09:15:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I can’t take this anymore!
Ring ring
What is wrong with me?!
Ring ring
I’m always so alone
Ring-ring
Why don’t I get to be happy?
Ring ring
I’m done with the suffering
Ring ring
*bang*
Ring ring
Please leave a message at the tone:
“Hey…. I’m sorry… I still love you…. Call me back”
Copyright ©
Veronica
... [
2014-01-10 21:15:19]
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Re: Ring-Ring
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by softerware on
Friday, 10th January 2014 @ 10:15:11 PM AEST
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Yikes! A scarey comedy of errors and bad timing! Nice moral: Never give up!!!
…it could happen! Hope not!
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Re: Ring-Ring
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by emystar on
Friday, 10th January 2014 @ 10:20:43 PM AEST
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GoodWelcome to YPDC.
Get work.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Ring-Ring
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by EveAlone on
Friday, 10th January 2014 @ 10:49:24 PM AEST
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| Wow, I don't know anything about poetry, but it definitely resonated with me. I have a few poems I have written, but I don't really know how to do it. I really like how your poem flowed. It made me feel something. I didn't get it at first, I'm slow I guess. But upon the second read, I really liked it. Welcome to the site. |
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