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The fourth dream
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Thursday, 9th January 2014 @ 08:29:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The fourth dream
How callous my heart has become
That it can no longer know the sounding of its own song
That it has come to steady at the affliction of its own wounds
Did I ever love her?
The fourth dream
Is a whisper
A heavy breath of pain
The fourth dream is the last time I saw her
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Re: The fourth dream
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by emystar on
Thursday, 9th January 2014 @ 09:12:44 PM AEST
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Hello my friend.
Very touching write.
Big huggs,
emy |
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Re: The fourth dream
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 10th January 2014 @ 10:08:25 AM AEST
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Intriguing poem, leaves me thinking there's more of a story behind this... Makes me wonder :)
Great write!!! |
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Re: The fourth dream
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by softerware on
Friday, 10th January 2014 @ 10:21:43 PM AEST
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You tell part of your tale..and leave me wondering what of the rest that brought you to this fourth dream?
Curious and unfinished..you trust your reader to write the rest!
such a compliment! Thank you.
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Re: The fourth dream
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by alicewhite on
Tuesday, 21st January 2014 @ 03:51:25 PM AEST
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| I am enjoying reading your dream poems, very interesting alluring and haunting, leaves the reader with a sense of a puzzle to solve, just as all dreams are, Great theme, love it,xxx |
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Re: The fourth dream
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by Spike on
Sunday, 26th January 2014 @ 06:56:37 AM AEST
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And the death knell of love is when we question its existence, after championing it for so long...
Pain and dissolution capably worded, and far too reminiscence for this ragged Lothario.
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