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Shades Of Autumn
Contributed by
LutherSeahand
on
Monday, 6th January 2014 @ 12:25:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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At last, a welcomed light Autumn breeze,
Whistling passed steepled roofs,
Gently lifting branches of the bowing sycamore trees
Lining dull gray sidewalks still toasty warm
From the sweltering heat of the day before;
Departing summer flees threads of deep purple clouds
Leaching westward from the eastern sky,
Inky streams clawing their way into lighter shades of dusk,
The new season has cast her dye.
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Re: Shades Of Autumn
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by thistle_and_fern on
Monday, 6th January 2014 @ 02:05:44 AM AEST
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Very visual words - I could picture the trees and the warmth
Lovely |
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Re: Shades Of Autumn
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by emystar on
Monday, 6th January 2014 @ 04:04:18 AM AEST
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I m ready for sunshine in Arkansas USA.
It's cold hear.
Blessings,
emy
Good work. |
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Re: Shades Of Autumn
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by Voyager on
Monday, 6th January 2014 @ 05:18:08 AM AEST
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| Very good imagery, intricately descriptive, it flows well, colourful. nicely done. |
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Re: Shades Of Autumn
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by desire on
Monday, 6th January 2014 @ 08:39:21 AM AEST
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| What a beautiful visual, I loved it |
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Re: Shades Of Autumn
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by Spike on
Wednesday, 8th January 2014 @ 06:51:32 AM AEST
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quite a seasonal palette strewn across the landscape of sky and land, engaging all of the senses as witness to the shift. A top read.
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