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Face palm?
Contributed by
saramic
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Saturday, 4th January 2014 @ 04:45:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Let my poem paint a picture
Not a photoshop restructure
Let not a gif lead your mind to a gaffe
Lear not, lest I be your Falstaff
Let my poem lead you, mislead you
I Minotaur, shall you amaze
Let my poem refract you
I Sphinx, return you the gaze
Let my poem unwind you
I Medusa, writhe your mind
Let my poem alert you from drowse
I Cassandra , to you verse unkind
Let my poem awaken your sleep
I Usha, hymn you a New Dawn!
KalpanaS copyright 01. 2014
Copyright ©
saramic
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2014-01-04 04:45:59]
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Re: Face palm?
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by Voyager on
Saturday, 4th January 2014 @ 04:51:32 AM AEST
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| I like how you've used famous mythological symbols to allegorically convey your message suited to modern times. Excellent write. |
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Re: Face palm?
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by thistle_and_fern on
Sunday, 5th January 2014 @ 03:50:06 AM AEST
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Very cleverly written
Thank you for sharing
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