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The third dream
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Thursday, 2nd January 2014 @ 10:05:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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The third dream
I will always remember the first time I fell in love
The first taste of tears
The silence
I have
Opened a well
Of broken dreams
And they have opened into me
A truth
That I cannot keep
The third dream
Is a of row cars
Light after light
The cold winter night
Stumbling down
The third dream is a trembling
Tear stained hand
Hiding a smile
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iodinelove
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2014-01-02 22:05:05]
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Re: The third dream
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by ming on
Thursday, 2nd January 2014 @ 10:19:06 PM AEST
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| Wow! I feel your pain. And you write with heart. Amazing. |
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Re: The third dream
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by thistle_and_fern on
Friday, 3rd January 2014 @ 02:27:41 AM AEST
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First time for falling in love can be magical and painful all at once.
Well done |
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Re: The third dream
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by Voyager on
Friday, 3rd January 2014 @ 08:08:21 AM AEST
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| A very nice narrative poem qritten in the form of a dream sequence. |
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