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Wrath Write Wrong
Contributed by
saramic
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Thursday, 2nd January 2014 @ 12:00:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Wrath is not a wraith but if ignored it will haunt
But if unleashed becomes demonic dire its taunt
Passion through compassion’s control grows gaunt
Then lean but not mean it does what the meek shan’t
Emotion is neutral: so mind what it can or can’t
01-2014
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Re: Wrath Write Wrong
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd January 2014 @ 01:38:28 AM AEST
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There's a few if, ands and but's here, reminds me of law school or the opposite of an old yarn that tells a story that makes sense.
I glean out of this common sense, in regards to moral courage, which isn't easy sometimes.
Great writing. Emotion can do a lot, and it can't do a lot. People can play on someone's emotion,
and that can be a terrible thing one sees, by reading the news, or even just by knowing a bit about what we ourselves are capable of doing without thinking...
Lot to think about here in this short piece.
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Re: Wrath Write Wrong
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by saramic on
Thursday, 2nd January 2014 @ 03:53:29 AM AEST
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| thank you |
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Re: Wrath Write Wrong
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by desire on
Saturday, 11th January 2014 @ 06:34:57 PM AEST
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I liked this a lot
There are two sides to every thing
It can always go either way
But I hear ya
Thanks for sharing |
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