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Spring
Contributed by
LutherSeahand
on
Wednesday, 1st January 2014 @ 01:17:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The finest day of spring
Petals dance on sudden gales
Counting everyone
Before the sinking sun
Fly, fly little wings
Like love that never fails
Shadows begin to wake
To a chorus that is the night
Crickets fiddle, slow
Warblers whistle, low
Shine, shine velvet moon
Till last you fade from sight
Hear the sea in song
Where the swallows play and die
Starlight in the haze
Flicker fireflies, ablaze
Stay, stay gentle dream
Beneath the candles in the sky
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Re: Spring
(User Rating: 1 ) by thistle_and_fern on
Wednesday, 1st January 2014 @ 02:27:31 AM AEST (User
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Love the line
"beneath the candles in the sky"
what a fantastic description of stars.
Brilliant
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